Okay, more poetry for my class. Maybe this one will get a better reception with my classmates. Just remember, I do not claim to be a poet!
Brittni Lasater
Shadow
As I mosey out
Twilight hovers thick.
Sight is hindered.
Still, I sense him behind me.
Turning ‘round to look
Is impolite so
I just sneak a glance.
He is closer than before.
Pulse redlining, I
Near my car.
I double my pace
Then my shadow triples his.
Quick, unlock. Unlock!
Snatch the door handle.
My racing heart halts
Because another stranger
Waits inside and smiles
At my pursuer.
That’s when I realize it’s
Not my car.
LOL!!! That is great! I love all the suspense ...I can feel the fear! I can feel the pulse quickening then... the punch at the end that the puruer is just someone going to their own car! lol
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haha I remember this poem.
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